Here is a sample of some excerpts from cover letters that I have recently received:
- “I am very detailled oriented and my employers have been impressed with me.” Note to candidate…perhaps you should consider spell check the next time you are so “detailed”
- “I have had the advantage of knowing very early on what I want to do with my life. ” And what exactly do you want to do? Perhaps the fact that this person has had 5 jobs in the past 4 years should be a clue that switching industries or careers might be beneficial.
- “I would greatly appreciate the opportunity to come and meet with you at your convenience. ” How else would you meet with me, not at my convenience?
- “Combining sound science with knowledge in human behavior, I have analyzed data, and aided in turning high-level findings into actionable interactive strategies for clients.” I think of myself as an educated person and I have absolutely no idea what this means!
- “Ihave attached my resume and qualifications for your review andconsideration. I have a Bachelor ofScience degree inEconomics and I have alsocompleted several graduate andprofessional level real estate courses.” Perhaps you could add some spaces in between your words!
- “Although I do not have any experience in real estate, I cannot seem to land a job in any other industry.” At least this candidate is honest, although she was not granted an interview!
- “On numerous occasions I would work as long as needed.” How about on other occasions?
- “References are available upon request.” Of course they are! You need not include this in your cover letter or your resume.